Otaku-Seraph on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/otaku-seraph/art/Queen-Penalia-440232354Otaku-Seraph

Deviation Actions

Otaku-Seraph's avatar

Queen Penalia

By
Published:
562 Views

Description

The main antagonist of my story, Queen Penalia. Please, tell me what you think!

More to come later.


Queen Penalia belongs to me.
Image size
968x1296px 31.95 KB
© 2014 - 2024 Otaku-Seraph
Comments82
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
wolley2xjd's avatar
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Ok let's try this again Well we have a Demon am I Right? Sorry but I really can't tell by the lack of information about please put some up so I can like her more please?
Anyway I Still think that the breasts are still a problem even though you explained to me your reasoning which makes sense but still may be they can be just slightly closer or even make her flat cheasted I think she would look better flat cheasted but hey if you want kerp it the same hey that's fine by me.
Another thing I not like the way her face looks.
Penalia:Are you saying that i'm ugly?
Dwayne:Yes.
Penalia: DIE! Penalia rips my Heart out and Eats it like about Apple.
Penalia:MMmmmm it's...Sweet?
Dwayne:Yeah can have my Heart back?
Penalia:WHAT THE HELL YOUR STILL ALIVE?
So yeah getting by to the critique I like the Colors of her dress and the thing around her neck look interesting does that give her her powers? Just asking but anyway I think the only thing you should fix is her face and give her a Backstory and that's about it.
Dwayne:Sorry about what I said I think you look kind cute. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
Penalia: (Blushes) B-Baka!